Flashes of light
Drowning unknown faces;
You cannot see yourself,
How can you see anyone else?
You’re lost
But you don’t know in whose world.
You don’t even know
Whether these flashes of light
That you’re holding on to
Will die out
Or just
Enbalm you for a moment.
A frizzy moment;
Scratching your nerves,
Ticking on your mind,
Preying on your soul,
Fading out in a moment.
A frizzy moment.
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That moment matters, only for a moment…
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☺I wish you well in all moments friend.
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Thanks. I wish the same for you🙂
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A terrible feeling depicted so perfectly.
Hope you are well.
Have a good weekend.
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Thank you so much. Hope you have a great weekend as well!
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THANKS
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PEOPLE NEED TO LIVE IN THE NOW SHREYA, AND NOT SAVE NOW FOR THE FUTURE.
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I agree, but the present is very delusionary…
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“You’re lost… But don’t know in whose world”
Woww!
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Thank you😊
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Wow, this touched me!
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Thank you Saania😊
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This speaks profoundly to today’s society.
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I have written this keeping in mind today’s culture. Thanks for stopping by my profile 😃
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Brilliant.
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Thank you 😊
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Your words have a beautiful grip.
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I’m glad that you feel so😊
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I mean it.. I wonder how many years have you been writing for
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Since 2007, to be accurate. And I just love it😁
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God! No wonder, I’m Impressed by your words. it’s been 13 years of you writing.
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Yes, that’s a very long time. It is and always will be a learning process. Reading, comprehending, relishing and writing. This cycle repeats!😃
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“You’re lost
But you don’t know in whose world.”
This is a fantastic piece of abstract writing, and those lines in particular stood out to me.
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Thank you, Scrunch😊
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No worries, thank you for sharing your work! 🙂
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