Breaking the geniality of the Azure,
She strides in majestically.
Rickety trees mourn in silence,
Over the cadaver of their beloved comrades.
Her presence is felt through shivers,
A cold heart is all that she bears.
The dermis of health is cracked open,
Leaving scars beyond cure.
Obscured in the cruelty of her disposition,
Lie verities indubitable.
She smells of a strange lonliness,
That shatters the insincerity of rosy images.
An isolation so grave,
Preaches sermons of running in pain.
She begins to end in a realization svelte,
Oh Winter! Your warmth will never be felt.


I keep coming back to this piece, and with each read-through, it gets better. I’m impressed with your vocabulary, natural feeling structure and just the simple beauty of the metaphor. Great stuff!
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Thank you so much Scrunch. Really means a lot😁
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Great poem
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Nice post:)
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Thank you 🙂
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That ending line is so powerful “oh winter! Your warmth will never be felt!” This whole poem is stunning and a very enjoyable read. Great writing ♡
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Thanks Brittny😄
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Welcome Shreya! 🙂
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I love the beginning
Marvelous piece of writing Shreya!
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Thank you so much Shivani🌼❤️
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